Reply To: Students do reading by their own personality is as important as, or more important than reading assigned by ‎teachers.‎

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April 2, 2021 at 9:13 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 40% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  3. Don’t fabricate something that challenges common sense i.e., ‘Reading on one’s own or following by teacher’s instruction is heated disputed over recent years. ‘

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