Reply To: Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

April 2, 2021 at 9:31 pm

 

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  2. Word choice problems.

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