Reply To: For future career success, is relating well to other people more important than studying hard at school?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing For future career success, is relating well to other people more important than studying hard at school? Reply To: For future career success, is relating well to other people more important than studying hard at school?

April 3, 2021 at 2:17 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 25% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  2. Lots of grammatical and word-choice problems.

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