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April 3, 2021 at 2:32 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  2. Most sentences are unclear.