Reply To: Tpo54

April 3, 2021 at 2:33 am

Partial Revision [most sentences are problematic.]

In modern society, people [ /citizens can  ] oversee the[article error   ] government finances.[ missing a transition word here  ] Controversy arises with more attention being put to arts or athletics[ unclear  ]. Some point[ out  ] that government should spend more money on arts instead of sports, but I reject[ incomplete sentence  ].