Reply To: TPO 41 section 1

April 4, 2021 at 1:18 am

The reading passage listed[lists/presents  ] three arguments (of companies to oppose new regulations)[ unclear ] .[punctuation error concerning coordinating conjunction  ] But the lecture fights against that[unclear pronoun  ] by claiming[ that ] the insufficiency  [ of xxx ] existing[ exists ] in the current (stipulate)[word form error/unclear  ] .

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