Reply To: Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. Reply To: Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.

April 6, 2021 at 2:51 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical errors.

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