Reply To: For future career success, is relating well to other people more important than studying hard at school?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing For future career success, is relating well to other people more important than studying hard at school? Reply To: For future career success, is relating well to other people more important than studying hard at school?

April 6, 2021 at 2:57 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical errors.

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