Reply To: Today many young people change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Today many young people change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Reply To: Today many young people change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

April 11, 2021 at 2:39 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 100% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lengthy paragraphs; restrict each paragraph to 90 words. 
  3. Lots of grammatical errors.

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