Reply To: Society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

April 11, 2021 at 2:46 am

 

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  3. Lots of grammatical errors.

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