Reply To: In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Reply To: In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

April 11, 2021 at 2:53 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical errors.

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