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April 13, 2021 at 2:09 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 25% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical errors. 

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