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April 13, 2021 at 2:17 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing);
  2. Unnecessary use of passive sentences;
  3. Some sentences contain logical/factual issues.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.