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Social media and the Internet permeate every aspect of modern people’s life, giving people [ them ]more options than ever
in watching [ to watch ]movies[ poor logical connection between the two clauses ]. It[ unclear pronoun ] seems that watching movies is a good way to learn things about real life. [bad logical connection ]Thus, a body of opinion holds that only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching. However, many other kinds of movies [ poor comparision vs body of of opinions ]are artistic, humorous, or fancy, which are also attractive. [ punctuation error with coordinating conjunction ]So I disagree that movies that can teach us something about real life[repetition ] are the only category deserving watched[grammatical error ].
Admittedly, watching movies can help us learn something about real life. Some realistic movies illustrate how the heroes[ word contains multiple meanings ] deal with relationships in the office or how they conquer difficulties in their life. When we are watching these movies, these[ repetition ] career tips indeed benefit us. Besides, we can always obtain courage when the hero succeeds at the end of the film. This kind of movie reveals [ article error ]reality and teaches us a lot[vauge ]. However, many people watch movies are not [ grammatical eror ]for learning but[ for ] entertainment instead.
Some foreign movies exhibit exotic scenery[word form error ] and tell a historical story[ word form error ]. The contents of this kind of movie are far from our real life. However, by watching these, we can enjoy exotic cultures and watch a fantastic story. Although this[unclear pronoun ] cannot help us in our real lives, it[unclear pronoun ] still provides good entertainment for people.
Additionally, action movies are also worth watching because they can offer audiences lots of fun. For example, the series of The Fast and The Furious, one of the most lucrative action movies in the world, has never lost its captivating lure because of the heart-stirring street racing and excitingly violent scenes, the tough guys, and the beauties.[wordy; difficult to read; unclear ] Although most audiences may not participate in racing in their real lives, they still choose to watch
The Fast and The Furious [this film ]in the theater.
(According to what I have mentioned before)[wrong phrase ], movies that can teach us something about real life are not the only type worth watching[repetition ].
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