Reply To: Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world. Use reasons and details to support your opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world. Use reasons and details to support your opinion. Reply To: Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world. Use reasons and details to support your opinion.

April 13, 2021 at 10:03 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  3. Misplaced words/phrases.

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