Reply To: The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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April 13, 2021 at 10:08 pm

The chart compares three different crimes in terms of their quantities[ occurrences ] from 1970 to 2005 in England and Wales.

Overall, the period between 1970 and 2005 witnessed increasing trends in the numbers of the three crimes. Among them, the number of car theft[ word form error ] showed the most significant rise. Besides, it is noticeable that the quantity [ while the number ]of street robbery[word form error  ] remained the least for the whole time.

[ Specifically, both ]England and Wales experienced a stable growth in the number of car theft[ word form error ] [,  ]from 0.4 million in 1970 to a[ inconsistency in number representation ] million in 1990. Then the[this  ] number soared to the maximum (1.6 million) in 1995. It[ unclear pronoun ] was followed by a sharp decline to the same level in 1990.[unclear  ] Between 1970 and 2000, the quantity of street robbery[ word form error ] reached a plateau at approximately 0.2 million. It[ unclear pronoun ] went up slightly in[during  ] the following[ /subsequent ] 5 years.

In the initial 5 years, the number of house burgling[ word form error ] climbed marginally from 0.2 million to 0.4 million. There[ unclear subject that affects logical flow of the essay ] was a[ article error ] up and down in the number of house burgling[ word form error ] from 1975 to 1985. The number peaked at 0.9 million in 1980. Then, it stayed roughly the same level in[ /during/for ] the final 20 years.

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