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Streaming media, electronic equipment, and the Internet permeate every aspect of modern people’s life, giving them[ unclear pronoun ] more options than ever to watch movies.[ It is not a good introduction, which is marginally associated with ‘watching movies’ and ‘real life’. ] Nowadays, people can watch movies not only in the movie theater but also through the Internet.[ irrelevant ] At the same time, which[Which ] kind of movie is worth watching has become a concerned question. A body of opinion holds that only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching. However, a different opinion[ unmatched comparison ] thinks[ wrong word ] that many other kinds of movies[ punctuation error ] which are artistic, humorous, or fancy, are also attractive. So, I disagree that movies that can teach us something about real life[repetition ] are the only category worth watching. [ The introductory paragraph contains lots of repetitions. ]
Admittedly, watching movies can help us learn something about real life[ repetition ] . Some realistic movies illustrate how the leading roles[wrong word ] cope with relationships[unclear word ] in the office or how they conquer difficulties in their life. When we are watching these movies, [ poor logical connection ] career tips indeed benefit us. Besides, we can always obtain courage when the hero succeeds at the end of the film. However, many people watch movies not for learning but for entertainment.
Many foreign films show exotic customs and tell historical stories. The contents of this kind of movie are far from our real life. However, by watching these[ unclear pronoun ] , we can enjoy exotic cultures and watch a fantastic story. Although these movies cannot help us in our real lives, it [wrong pronoun ] still provides good entertainment for people.
Additionally, action movies are also worth watching because they can offer audiences[ form error ] lots of fun. For example, the series of The Fast and The Furious, one of the most lucrative[ unclear word ] action movies in the world, has never lost its captivating lure because of excitingly[ word form error ] street racing, the tough guys, and the beauties[ unclear word ] . Although most audiences[word form error ] may not participate in racing in their real lives, [ poor logical connection ] they still choose to watch this film in the theater.
In a conclusion[ wrong phrase ] , there are many movies worth watching, not just educational ones.