Reply To: Professors at universities should spend more time doing research than educating students.

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April 17, 2021 at 2:00 am

Score: 39.9

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 25% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision ).

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