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The internet, without question, has become very important in our life. Such as attending work meetings through Skype, studying remotely through Zoom and watching videos on Youtube, etc.[grammatical error ] However, whether the internet has more positive impacts than negative ones on our life is [ being ] debated by people. I think that the internet exerts more positive effects on our life.
First, the internet helps improve our life through[ unclear preposition ] instant information connections. For students, there is (more access)[grammatical error ] to advanced educational resources. Today, (a student in China interested)[ unclear ] in computer science has access to class videos from[unclear preposition ] top-tier universities like MIT and Stanford in America. However, before (the widespread use of the)[ wordy ] internet, this[ unclear pronoun ] could not happen because of the[ article error ] geographical distance limitation. Also, the internet brings (ample opportunities)[ word form error ] for booming commercial activities, (as we see astounding transactions of companies like Amazon or Alibaba)[wordy/grammatical error ] . Thanks to the internet, people now have more choices in purchasing goods, which leads to a better living standard and reduce[ grammatical error ] living costs.
Second, the internet makes the world more peaceful and harmonious.[ loss of logical connection between sentences ] People are more accessible to news, which vastly[wrong adverb ] improves their knowledge of the world. Therefore, the internet helps people get to know different cultures and traditions, promotes mutual understanding, and reduces hostility among people[ word form error ] living in various countries. For example,
my friend Tommy told me that one series of Youtube videos makes[ grammatical error ] him[my friend Tommy ] anticipate a trip[ incompleteness ] and reduce[ grammatical error ] his prejudices[ word form error ] towards China. For comparison, in the pre-internet era, limited choices were available (to people to learn)[avoid using 2 ‘to’ in one sentence ] about other countries. In this case, hostility towards other nations is easy to arouse, just like the cold war between the soviet-union and America.
In conclusion, I think the internet, one of the most significant technological inventions, brings more benefits than harms to humanity. That is because it has improved our life and promoted world peace.