Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.

April 17, 2021 at 2:15 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lots of grammatical errors and unclear sentences.

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