Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

April 17, 2021 at 1:15 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  3. Lots of grammatical errors.

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