Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

April 20, 2021 at 12:04 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lengthy paragraphs; restrict each paragraph to 90 words. 

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