Reply To: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Reply To: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

April 28, 2021 at 4:29 pm

Score: 47.9

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision ).

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