Reply To: The rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing The rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society. Reply To: The rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society.

May 3, 2021 at 5:14 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing).

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