Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

May 3, 2021 at 5:23 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical errors and unclear sentences.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.