Reply To: Statement of purpose for a PhD program

December 25, 2019 at 2:13 am

Score: 37.2 (A good-quality SOP should score 80+)

Issues:

  1. Lengthy sentences make the essay very difficult to read. Split/shorten sentences exceeding 20 words;
  2. Abundant grammatical errors.

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