Reply To: Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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December 30, 2019 at 2:59 pm

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  1. More than 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words; reduce the percentage to 0-10%;
  2. About 75% of the sentences contain more than 20 words; reduced it to 0-20%.

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