Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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December 30, 2019 at 4:31 pm

Score: Ungraded

Issues:

  1. More than 30% of the sentences contain passive voice; use their active counterparts.
  2. 100% of the sentences exceed 20 words; reduce it to 20% or less.

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