Reply To: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Reply To: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

December 31, 2019 at 3:29 am

Score: 52.4

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive voice. Reduce the number to 10%-;
  2. More than 25% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Reduce the number to 10%-.

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