Reply To: With the widespread use of the Internet, more people choose to work or study from home. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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December 31, 2019 at 3:54 am

Score: 59.8

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  1. More than 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them to 20 words.

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