Reply To: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Reply To: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

January 2, 2020 at 2:05 am

Score: 58.4

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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