Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

January 2, 2020 at 2:18 am

Score: Ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. You need to convert them into their active counterparts;
  2. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. You need to reduce the percentage to 15% or less.

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Sentence length: 54.5% of the sentences contain more than 20 words, which is more than the recommended maximum of 25%. Try to shorten the sentences.