Reply To: Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

January 2, 2020 at 10:13 pm

Score: Ungraded

Issues:

  1. 100% of the sentences contain 20+ words. Shorten and split all of them.
  2. About 40% of the sentences are passive. You need to convert them into their active counterparts.

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