Reply To: People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

January 2, 2020 at 10:49 pm

Score: 52.3

Issues:

  1. More than 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. You need to shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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