Reply To: Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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January 3, 2020 at 2:09 am

Score: 56.5

Issues:

  1. More than 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

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