Reply To: Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Reply To: Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet.

January 3, 2020 at 2:22 am

Score: 49.9

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words.

Sorry, I won’t work on your essay since you failed to work on the main issue mentioned in the last revision (more than 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words).