Reply To: Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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January 3, 2020 at 3:34 pm

Score: 43.1

Issues:

  1. Nearly 50% of the sentences are passive. You MUST convert them into their active counterparts.

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