Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.  Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. 

January 13, 2020 at 7:33 pm

Score: 54.4

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts;
  2. The optimal length of a TOEFL essay is 300-320 words. Shorten your essay to 320-words;
  3. Lots of punctuation errors in relation to the use of coordinating words;
  4. Word repetition, i.e., Think.

Resolve these issues and then resubmit your essay.