Reply To: The government and corporation should share all their scientific discoveries with other countries in the world. Please use specific details and examples to support your opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing The government and corporation should share all their scientific discoveries with other countries in the world. Please use specific details and examples to support your opinion. Reply To: The government and corporation should share all their scientific discoveries with other countries in the world. Please use specific details and examples to support your opinion.

January 13, 2020 at 10:37 pm

Score: 43.7

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them to their active counterparts.

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