Reply To: It is always better to purchase in large stores than in several small shops that specialize in different items.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is always better to purchase in large stores than in several small shops that specialize in different items. Reply To: It is always better to purchase in large stores than in several small shops that specialize in different items.

January 14, 2020 at 8:12 pm

Score: 71.6

Issues:

  1. More than 40% of the sentences contain 20 + words. You MUST reduce the percentage to 20%-.

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