Reply To: Some people say that kids age 5-10 should be allowed to play outside once every hour, while others say that they should be allowed to play outside only during the noon break.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Some people say that kids age 5-10 should be allowed to play outside once every hour, while others say that they should be allowed to play outside only during the noon break. Reply To: Some people say that kids age 5-10 should be allowed to play outside once every hour, while others say that they should be allowed to play outside only during the noon break.

January 14, 2020 at 8:31 pm

Score: 73.4

I will send you back the revised essay shortly.