Reply To: For success in school and work, the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than having excellent knowledge of a job or a field to study.

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January 14, 2020 at 10:41 pm

Score: 52.4

Issues:

  1. The optimal length of a TOEFL essay is 280-320 words. Shorten your essay to 320- words;
  2. Restrict each paragraph within 90 words;
  3. More than 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  4. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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