Reply To: Question: In many countries, today people are living in a ‘throwaway society’, where things are used in a short time and then thrown away. What are its causes? What are its problems?

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January 15, 2020 at 8:16 pm

Score: 58.6

Problems:

  1. More than 35% of the sentences contain 20+ words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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