Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Reply To: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

January 16, 2020 at 4:14 pm

Score: 66.1

Issues:

  1. More than 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. You must shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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