Reply To: At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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January 16, 2020 at 6:08 pm

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  1. Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts.

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