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As a large part of our lives, shopping happens almost every day. In terms of whether we should always buy goods from large stores, varied ideas abound. A large variety[ number] of customers hold that we should buy commodities from supermarkets all the time. However, as far as I am concerned, although consuming in big stores can meet our needs in many aspects, I still prefer to shop in small stores now and then.

I admit that a large store is able to provide us with assorted goods. (Even we may come across a discount on it.)[remove; irrelevant ] In addition, the[ many] large stores might have a good location and possess available lots to park. However, the big store[ inconsistent/stores-store] is impossible to sell everything. For example, the supermarket[inconsistent ] is hardly selling professional telescopes and famous watercolors. Besides, we can find some advantages in small specializing[word form error ] stores.

The first advantage of buying in those small stores is that we can experience a relates to the better service they present. [ wordy] Compared to a big store, a small store has fewer customers. Therefore, the waiters from the small store would like to introduce more details about our target merchandise. In addition, those waiters are more likely to encourage us to try the target product so that we can assure if determine whether the tried product can meet our needs. For example, when we buy a bicycle in a small bicycle shop, the shop owner will more be able[wordy ] to introduce the details of a bike to us and inspire[ logical confusion/who inspires?] us to take a shot.

Another advantage that we buy specific items Shopping in small shops additionally allows us to buy the most appropriate items. Generally speaking, we all have such experience.[redundant ] When purchasing a matter[ wrong word] for the first time, for instance, we might merely know the goods’ name. In this situation, the experienced owner of a small/boutique store with rich experience may help match what we expect and what they provide (and then select)[ logical confusion] the best item.