Reply To: Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.

January 21, 2020 at 9:02 pm

Score: Ungraded

Issues:

  1. 100% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Reduce the percentage to 15%-;
  2. About 75% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.