Reply To: To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 

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January 23, 2020 at 3:02 pm

Score: 45.6

Issues:

  1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Reduce the percentage to 20%-;
  2. Several paragraphs are lengthy. Restrict each to 90 words;
  3. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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