Reply To: Some people think that university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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January 25, 2020 at 11:03 pm

Score: 35.6

Issues:

  1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them;
  2. Nearly 50% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.