Reply To: The internet dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing The internet dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this? Reply To: The internet dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

January 28, 2020 at 3:39 am

Score: 52.7

Issues:

  1. Nearly 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Reduce it to 20%- by shortening/splitting sentences.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.